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I could see you from beneath the stairs
Searching through the cracks that be there
Looking upon what wasn't true
But then my life was lost

Would you leave me in the dark?
Would you let me fall alone?
I would have been the first to take the fall
But would my life be lost?

Would you believe me if I died?
Would you even start to cry?
Would you let me fall alone?
Would you let me die alone tonight?

(Are you with me?)
I don't want to go alone tonight
(Are you with me?)
Would you leave me in the dark?

I could see you looking at me
Watching as I fall beneath the ground
I was the first, and always was
The one that wen away.

Would you believe me if I died?
Would you let me fall alone?
Would you let me die alone tonight?
©2004-2009 ~BouncingSoul
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lol.. i dunno nothing about poetry .. the pic is crazy .. =D .. good job =D=D

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Thats a really strong poem. I think its really good

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'In my dreams I'm dying all the time, As I wake its kaleidoscopic mind' - Porcelain - Moby
Thanx again and again. :highfive:
you're so damned lonely...It's beautiful, but worries me biout your mental state oh yes ;) lol...it's great man....the title, Smashing Pumpkins right?

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"Look two women fucking a polar bear..."
Maybe I am mental and maybe I'm not. :spin:
And no I did not get it from Smashing Pumpkins but now that I think about it. FUCK. It's from one of their songs. The title I mean. But thanx. And by the way I'm not lonely. she's mine....

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Apologies to anything I got wrong...

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"Look two women fucking a polar bear..."
It's ok. No offense taken.
great poem, great pic...so true and so sad, love hurts :'(

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